The part before encounter feels deeply intimate like going through someone's diary. I have to re-read it to fully understand how I feel but for the first time it was a little hard for me to concentrate. We learn nothing about main character during prologue and after finishing it I was left with a feeling rather than facts about her. There is this atmosphere of longing and sadness but aside from that there’s nothing left inside my head that I can say about MC. For some reason I can’t recall what she was thinking about while she was alone.
Also with a different text box format there’s no distinction in text between what MC thinks or feels and her actions. Usually we read internal monologue then *click* it disappears and we get next few lines about what is our character doing. Here everything blurs into a wall of text.
“At least for now she wants to figure out how she ends up here and for what reason.”
“She tests her limbs again, they’re heavy to move etc”
Maybe you could change text color or use cursive writing to make those parts more distinguished?